Sunday, 30 May 2010

MANY SPLENDID SUNS

yellow                              satellite
dishes swivel round,a
     round to catch the

   sOUND

of sun                              BUZZING
over the                           SKY
             many
furry butter
                  eyes
looking over
                  green shoulders
to catch the extra
                 terrestrial bee
or butter
               fly
these many
       swarms of dande
lions
       are many splendid
suns

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2 comments:

  1. Natasha Milburn Lalita (Novelist)31 May 2010 at 02:13

    Beautiful

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  2. Manic3 June 2010 at 11:50

    Excellent, I wish I could acheive such affect with so few words. The right words in the right order - economy is the hallmark of a skilled writer.

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